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It's Alright
Contributed by
big_B
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Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 03:45:41 PM in AEST
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oops
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No one will hurt you
I swear it
All them worries you have
Just bear it
Ill take care of it
Itll all be alright
He wont touch you again
Ill beat him just right
Please, don’t cry baby
You will make me cry to
If you make me cry
Ill kill him for you
No, I shouldn’t kill him
I just want to protect you
Friggin rapist wont touch you again
Ill cat his hands off of him
Im sorry girl, don’t listen to me
Im sorry you have to see me angry
Don’t worry baby im her
Come on girl, come over to me
Hey girl, give me a hug
A simple squeeze to help your problems
Even if you cry all night
Ill be here, making it alright
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2006-05-09 15:45:41]
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Re: It's Alright
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 07:24:35 PM AEST
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I like that line
"He won't touch you again
I'll beat him just right."
It had a hint of connotation for reason and restraint
belied though by some gruesome thoughts that went back to reason and a little calmer and collected restraint not lackin' resolve to protect. Not bad fer a kid. Talk to ya in a pm.
wabl
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Re: It's Alright
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:33:46 AM AEST
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| I think this is a good try. I can really feel your words in this one (although some of them are misspelled) This is not bad. |
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