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A Perfect Night
Contributed by
JarrodLuke
on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 12:24:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Indigo waves fall on bleached white grains.
Placid sea untouched by no other corruption
Than the moon’s ethereal face.
Let the soothing sound of the east wind
Guide you safely into dreams of night
No finer than this.
Copyright ©
JarrodLuke
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2006-05-09 12:24:33]
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Re: A Perfect Night
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 03:47:05 PM AEST
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this was a great post...welcome to the site
wiz |
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Re: A Perfect Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 03:48:15 PM AEST
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Wow, It made my skin felt like when something excites you. Like happy about something.
And also, makes you think about tranquility.
Very well written, It is Really The Perfect Night. |
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Re: A Perfect Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 06:46:48 PM AEST
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Wow. So soft and delicate and absolutely breathtaking.
It truly describes a perfect night. Beautiful imagery here.
You captured the emotion eloquently in so very few words.
Impressive.
~Breezy |
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