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I Drove Around All Night
Contributed by
notaprettygirl
on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i drove around all night
shaky hands gripping the wheel
mascara streaked face
peering out at the stars
as the memories crashed about
through my mind
the warmth of summer
wind tangling our hair
sounds of the radio clashing
with laughter and squeals
sometimes not a word was spoken
intertwined hands was enough
to fill the silence
perhaps i was searching for you
or maybe just trying to hush
the screaming of my heart
either way i came out empty handed
with only those bitter sweet memories
crashing about through my mind
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2003-02-05 11:00:00]
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Re: I Drove Around All Night
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 12:07:33 PM AEST
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| ive been there too, your poetry is full of love, pain, and heartache...i think your a lovely writer, will watch for more from you.. |
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Re: I Drove Around All Night
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by notaprettygirl on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 03:57:31 PM AEST
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| thanks, lady. you are an awesome person. you've brightened up my day. :) i hope you enjoy more of my pieces. take care always. :hugs: |
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Re: I Drove Around All Night
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by Misha on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 04:30:07 PM AEST
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| my attention is caught by the flare in your writing. it fits me the way that ani difranco's music covers me. |
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Re: I Drove Around All Night
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by notaprettygirl on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 11:47:48 AM AEST
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| thank you so much, Misha. god, being compared to ani is like...wow. ani rocks! :) i'm really glad that you enjoyed this. ::hugs:: |
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Re: I Drove Around All Night
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by M on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 11:42:22 AM AEST
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| I don't know what to say, except that this is such a good poem... i love it all... |
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Re: I Drove Around All Night
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by notaprettygirl on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 09:00:49 PM AEST
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| thanks a lot, M. :) you made me smile one of those giddy cheesy smiles. *hehe* i'm happy you enjoyed it. take care. ::hugs:: |
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