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Contributed by diablohate on Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 08:31:42 AM in AEST
Topic: secrets

looking in a mirror
tring to remember
all all i've surrendered
since you have entered.....my life

days go by
and nights crumble
as the darkness spreads
throughout this empty shell....that is me

why am i like this
you always ask
but the answer this there
it just has to be found....before it's too late

walking thorough this empty
eating at a silent table
echos are rare found
but i am happy....when their not around

closing my eyes to find my past
searching throughout my lonely mind
finding nothing but a tear down my cheek
and i'm soo close to finding the truth....but my family has left

but now i stare into the sky
talking to god or maybe just air
and the darkness still consumes me
because everything that i love is gone.....even you

so i sit and prey for my sins
and load up my friend
everything i left behind
is not my problem....outside my door

........................boom..........the job is done..........please forgive me father.........for i have sinned..........and was sucked into sin........just to have firends.........that were not really true.........and now i see the error in my ways.......please forgive them.

"god speaks in many ways.......but the christains now a-days are nothing but a cult......don't get confused.......follow your own path....that is the beauty of your choice........and nobody else"
-DIABLOHATE

p.s. for the christains cult thing i mean the churchs......that no longer do it for the passion.......just for the money from the members that supply it.

Copyright © diablohate ... [ 2006-05-09 08:31:42]
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Re: !&? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 08:28:34 PM AEST
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Hmmm, a few gramatical errors, but I love the passion that you express here...you obviously are not that empty after all!

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