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Sparkling like an Emerald....
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 08:50:42 PM in AEST
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Renduring lights which show the way
To a new opening from beyond the gray
A new light which has brought to mind
Listless wonders which have gone in time
A new beginning and simple pleasures arrayed
May not be for all yet the easiest has been dismayed
For now until the light goes dim
I will be sparkling and more just like the simplest jem...
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brew
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2006-05-08 20:50:42]
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Re: Sparkling like an Emerald....
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by halli on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 08:57:16 PM AEST
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very nice brew good write and impatic.
love and hugs
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Re: Sparkling like an Emerald....
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by wizard on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 05:51:04 AM AEST
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nice write brew...i enjoyed reading this.
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Re: Sparkling like an Emerald....
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 08:08:21 PM AEST
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very nicely done Dayna - 'twas a joy to read~
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Re: Sparkling like an Emerald....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 10:25:26 PM AEST
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As always simple and yet u do make your point in such a poetic way, btw green is my favorite color so xtra kutos 4 this little gem, no pun intended lol. A most splendid little water color painting dayna . . .
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Re: Sparkling like an Emerald....
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:58:46 AM AEST
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this is equisite Dayna.. I cannot qote a favorite line..lest I quote the entire write
truly a wonder to read-
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Re: Sparkling like an Emerald....
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:59:01 AM AEST
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this is equisite Dayna.. I cannot quote a favorite line..lest I quote the entire write
truly a wonder to read-
B |
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