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Dirty Little Secret
Contributed by
notaprettygirl
on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
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little do you know
the reason why
i keep you awake all night
sobbing uncontrollably
tearing at the walls
maybe i'm searching
for something
for someone
that once calmed me
now so long gone
little do you know
about the sweet temptation
that echoes in my thoughts
how it would feel
for this blade
to scarlet my wrists
watching in amazement
as my numbness disappears
if only for a moment
little do you know
about the pain
the anger
that i hide
in that dark corner
of my mind
bound and gagged
wrapped in chains
this dirty little secret
i'm trying to keep from
ending me
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notaprettygirl
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2003-02-05 10:00:00]
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 12:09:24 PM AEST
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| keep writing, you've a gift.......... |
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by notaprettygirl on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 04:04:20 PM AEST
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| thank you. :blush: people like you are the reason i write. take care always. :hugs: |
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 04:40:55 PM AEST
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| this is so good... |
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by Chaos666 on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 01:34:46 AM AEST
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| WOW..... I am utterly speechless..... |
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by notaprettygirl on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 11:41:26 AM AEST
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| thank you. :blush: i'm glad you enjoyed this. :) take care. ::hugs:: |
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by kegs04 on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 05:50:34 PM AEST
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I liked this very much. I have felt the same way many a time before... thanks for sharing, great talent you have
peace out
~"kegs"
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by karoody on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 01:01:42 AM AEST
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| Very well written...Hope you find what you're looking for. |
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by notaprettygirl on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 12:25:45 PM AEST
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| thanks, kegs. i'm sorry that you've too felt this way before. it's very scary feeling lost. also thanks to you, karoody. i'll be with this special someone one day. :) i'm glad you both enjoyed this. ::hugs:: |
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:36:56 PM AEST
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| Bravo my dear...shear , powerful emotion. Very well done! Larry :o) |
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by notaprettygirl on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 09:12:00 PM AEST
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thank you so much, Raker. :) you made me happy. i'm glad that you enjoyed this. ::hugs::
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