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A Shadow
Contributed by
keilantra
on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 06:24:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Breaks the daylight, I am alone
Shines the sunlight, cold as a stone.
The silence is hard and
The music is soft
The fire is burning
The rain just won’t stop
I am here,
But only as a shadow.
You seem so vulnerable
But your whispers are so strong
You break others easily
Yet you are the song
That they sing,
But you’re only a shadow.
The stars seem the brightest
Amid noonday light
But the roses bloom most proficiently
During the darkest of nights
People love with a vengeance
And hate with light hearts
They’re all here respectively
To play their own parts
I was there,
But only as a shadow.
Breaks the daylight, but I am gone
I love with the Shade, and run from the Dawn.
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keilantra
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2006-05-08 18:24:54]
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Re: A Shadow
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by PoeticHybrid on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 06:33:37 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. I love the flow of the poem. Great ending lines too. |
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Re: A Shadow
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 12:28:02 AM AEST
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"I love with the Shade, and run from the Dawn."
I agree with poeticHybrid, the last line is easily the best, and the imagery is breathtaking. You've created a wispy fairy world of your own with your choice of words...well done.
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Re: A Shadow
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by Millennium on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 12:11:46 AM AEST
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you are definately the next edgar allan poe!
(in female form haha) |
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Re: A Shadow
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:48:27 AM AEST
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amazing. i could read this forever
diz |
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