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Each Others Mind
Contributed by
Ari
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Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 01:57:53 PM in AEST
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Finding some time
To talk about the bad
Is it cause of loneliness
Or is it cause your sad
Smiling can show a side
But one thats on the out
Making the in more inside
Making you just want to shout
Everyone goes through
Each others mind
But most of the time
Its hard to see what you find
It can look so familiar
Because you felt it too
Does that give you solace
Does it get you through?
Great part of living
Is walking your own way
Death comes to all
But to you, what will it say?
Copyright ©
Ari
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2006-05-08 13:57:53]
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Re: Each Others Mind
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by mindset on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:01:11 PM AEST
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| Nice twine of words and self experience in this piece....... |
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Re: Each Others Mind
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by brew on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 08:57:37 PM AEST
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Great words, that can send that messgae.........It can be differ for all, and time is what takes us all through life........! Good post, with flowing that eased. Keep posting, lots of talent.
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