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paper bag
Contributed by
rosewoodtree
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Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 12:42:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Cover me in shame,
My face it must not show,
Give me a paper bag,
Cut a hole out for the nose.
Leave my eyballs covered,
No one needs to see this soul,
Someone might discover,
That it's not an empty whole,
No one would suspect it,
Emotions live here too,
The person thats alone now,
Has feelings just like you.
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rosewoodtree
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2006-05-08 12:42:50]
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Re: paper bag
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by kaitee on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 01:27:45 PM AEST
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aww...
~Kaitee |
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Re: paper bag
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by je2ica3 on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 01:47:01 PM AEST
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I hate how others can be so cruel.
im glad you can put your emotions into words and not fists...awsome write keep it up. |
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Re: paper bag
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by Ari on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:03:20 PM AEST
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very nice write, really emotional and to the point.
it is a true shame how people can act without thinking of how it may affect others, everyone goes through what you were (are) feeling and I'd like to think we all move on as well... |
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