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No Disrespect........Just Listen
Contributed by
kaitee
on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 12:32:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Coming up on the world today
**** never seems to go my way
I'll take it though, I'm not complaining
Nothing worth getting comes without waiting
I see everyone else doing that thing
Smoking, drinking, having sex, the dream
Should I fall to their ways? It's so easy
Ten years Ill be fat, lazy, and sleazy
Na I gotta better plan
How bout you go to school, listen, and try to understand
Thats what the media wants you to be
That crackdealing, aids-infesting people you see
They make that life for you on tv
Dont gimme that **** about it being worse in the 70s
A real mind can tell the difference between smart and stupid
Love isnt having sex on the first date, and there aint no ************ named cupid
Why dont you listen
Why dont you care
Quit giving parents that blankass stare
Your not all knowing, and neither am I
I just dont want your ******** *** to die
I talk a big game and ill prove it to
You ever seen me light a blunt next to you?
I didnt think so
So hear me when I say this
Ive had my share of drugs
They friken suck and will leave you brainless
Copyright ©
kaitee
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2006-05-08 12:32:54]
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Re: No Disrespect........Just Listen
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by je2ica3 on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 01:50:02 PM AEST
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awsome write i loved it.
JUst maybe if you could get that painted on a bilboard ppl would listen. |
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Re: No Disrespect........Just Listen
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by xoXOSaDiEOXox on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 03:29:40 PM AEST
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| I really liked it and it's totally up to date with issues at the moment, which makes me like it evenmore. It's really good that you express your own opinions so clearly and boldly and i think that makes your poem stand out and appeal to the reader even more. Keep the good work up. ^^ |
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Re: No Disrespect........Just Listen
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by ek_da_poet on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 03:42:22 PM AEST
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| nice rhyming i predicted something very similiar to your future katie |
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