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Pain is Beauty
Contributed by
Lo2681
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Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:51:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Pretty girl with the face of an angel,
Has a tattoo of a heart,
Inside of a thorn halo.
Her hair is long and wavy,
With a touch of romance,
But all the ones she loves,
Just want inside her pants.
She has a ballerina’s body,
But a fighter’s crazy will,
She rarely ever has to hurt them,
Because her looks alone could kill.
Loved by the men with money,
Loved by the men with fame,
Loved by the ones she never wants,
Because all she loves is pain.
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Lo2681
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2006-05-08 04:51:03]
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Re: Pain is Beauty
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by PoeticHybrid on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 06:49:21 AM AEST
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| Very nice! I especiall like the third stanza. |
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Re: Pain is Beauty
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 06:52:08 AM AEST
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Jus maybe she don't luv pain but maybe it's all she knows.
Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Pain is Beauty
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by je2ica3 on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:09:51 PM AEST
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| stanza 3 is very nive but of course all of it is nice..i loved it pain is beauty awsome write |
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