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a mere passing
Contributed by
ichiban_girl
on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
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A lonely boy, oh how sad
he has no where to go
nobody to turn to
what will ever become of him?
An abused girl, she so scared
nobody will ever listen
nobody will hear her cries
what will ever become of her?
He walks down the road
same as always since abandoned
she crosses his path
she catches his eye.
this girl, this stange girl
has brought hope into his life
she was carrying groceries
for her abusers, for her family
this young boy, dressed in rags
sparked new life in her eyes
just by a mere passing
they are forever changed!
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ichiban_girl
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2003-02-05 07:30:00]
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Re: a mere passing
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 08:06:14 AM AEST
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| Nice words ichiban_girl makes a person think,how lonely life can be without anyone or a good family.Keep those poems coming ok?see ya Wes... |
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Re: a mere passing
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by TundraHydra on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 05:17:39 PM AEST
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| Great write. I loved it. Keep em comin' |
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