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I Promise
Contributed by
The_Young_Poet
on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 09:22:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know I’m hurting you
I can see it in your eyes
Love applies
To the heart
Which I broke
I can see that you’re aching
From all this sorrow
It’s as if I took a crossbow
And shot you through the heart
I now see that I haven’t been very smart
That I haven’t realized
I’ve been hurting you all along
I know all I ever was, was wrong
You’ve been acting all tough on the outside
Truly, I could see you were dying on the inside
Every time we had a fight
You had your pride
Which I took away
With every ray
Of cruelness I put towards you
I know now that you knew
That I wasn’t fair
But you kept giving me more chances
As I spent them with unawareness
Now I write my apology
Hoping that deep down
You can finally trust me
With you kind heart again
I promise not to cause the pain
I made you once go through
Time has passed
I won’t put you last
I’ve changed
As if my heart has been exchanged
For a more caring and kind heart
I promise to care
To be fair
No, I won’t be a liar
To you and everyone else
You’re my everything
Ill give you a ring
To promise my honesty
Trust me, I’ve known the achy
Feeling from all the lies
A rose
To symbolize love we could have
Because I know I crave yours
My Heart
To express how much I love you
That I’d do anything for your love and trust again
I promise
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The_Young_Poet
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2006-05-07 21:22:33]
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Re: I Promise
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 09:35:13 PM AEST
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Honest, hopeful and ... promising. Enjoyed.
wabl
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Re: I Promise
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 09:47:52 PM AEST
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Very touching write that not many could resist.
huggs,
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