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Angel Up high
Contributed by
ElliotRS
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Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 08:07:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I knew one day,
That a girl like you would come and change my way,
Way of thinking,
Making me say words as fast as my drawn eyes are blinking,
I blink fast because I dont miss a second of our time,
It's as if when I am with u we are in total sublime,
Sublime equals perfection and perfection equals you,
And if my eyes dont decieve, then you think the same way too,
Think the same way as we both lie in different thoughts,
Because staring at a clock brings up fantasies that are priceless;
Never could be bought.
And when I drift into sleep,
You come into mind almost at a slow seductive creep.
This is not bad nor good,
Because I want my dreams to be reality, Oh I wish I could!
So be my angel,
And Ill set you up high,
I know i wont regret, Ill never ask myself why.
Copyright ©
ElliotRS
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2006-05-07 20:07:17]
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Re: Angel Up high
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by The_Young_Poet on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 09:24:57 PM AEST
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| awwww this is good, i like it. nice piece. |
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Re: Angel Up high
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 05:00:48 AM AEST
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| aww really sweet poem! too bad she didn't deserve it:( |
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Re: Angel Up high
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by ilovebrittany on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 12:57:51 PM AEST
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ellbell is the greatest..
great poem dude ur a sick ass poetic |
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