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The darkness within
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 05:03:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i tryed my hardest to prove myself to you
now i take the blade from my backpack
and start to slice all over again
blood runing like water everywhere
just a few more cuts and then im there
just wanting to die and to see the heavens
blood on the floor and sink but i can't really see way to weak
i drop to my knees and start to die slowly
only if someone was here to hold me
the razor slips outta my hand only to fall in to blood again
some times you just wanna die but i couldn't control the darkness within
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Tiffyo4
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2006-05-07 17:03:44]
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Re: The darkness within
(User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 10:46:53 PM AEST
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| i know the feeling all to well but sometime it feels better just to tell hope u feel better ,not a bad write |
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Re: The darkness within
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 03:20:36 AM AEST
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This is very, very, very sad.
It's very heart breakin to me.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: The darkness within
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by ANK_1321_ERW on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 10:07:06 AM AEST
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| That is gorgous, sad and deep but beautiful in its simplcity. |
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