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The Edge
Contributed by
senorwoohoo
on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Glancing down the rocky cliff,
I try to move, my legs are stiff.
Jagged stones to ensure the end,
my soul to hell, I'm forced to send.
A normal life is gone for me,
its been like this since I could see.
My thoughts destroyed by hate and lies,
nobody hears my weakening cries.
I lift my leg, my death feels near,
but as I do, my mind seems clear.
I think of those whom I will miss,
to never feel your precious kiss.
I turn away from this demise,
as I am staring in your eyes.
Copyright ©
senorwoohoo
... [
2003-02-05 06:30:00]
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Re: The Edge
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 08:11:26 AM AEST
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| Good choice turn away from those jagged rocks below.You can write about them but you can't if you jump.see ya Wes... |
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Re: The Edge
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by SpreadYourWings on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 10:19:16 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write... |
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Re: The Edge
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by shasha on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 12:45:38 AM AEST
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| that was a great poem and i appreciate you writing it |
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Re: The Edge
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 12:45:42 AM AEST
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| that was a great poem and i appreciate you writing it |
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Re: The Edge
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by JAJnex on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 06:00:33 PM AEST
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| I liked the rhythm. cool poem |
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