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Walls
Contributed by
ElliotRS
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Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 11:54:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I throw my thoughts at the wall,
Hoping they will fill the cracks,
Because with cracks filled means more support,
More support means less tears,
Less tears means no depressed eyes,
Clear eyes means you can realize,
What's at stake,
And if its all fallacies then what does it take,
To make it unfake,
To make a distorted vision at least opaque,
Just give me the time of day.
Copyright ©
ElliotRS
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2006-05-06 23:54:54]
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Re: Walls
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by The_Young_Poet on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 12:39:13 AM AEST
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| sad poem, tho i like. Good job! |
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Re: Walls
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by Keilantra on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 10:10:42 AM AEST
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nicely done. i enjoyed this one. "hoping they will fill the cracks" good choice of words. keep it up.
*kei* |
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