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Process to Healing
Contributed by
kiela_Rox_mi_Socks
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Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 01:26:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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5-6-06
I’m not everything perfect,
He says I could be,
She tells me I should be,
They reply I would be.
Not broken yet,
Torn at the edges,
Letting my forgiveness set,
Not clung to the deaths ledge.
A new day of freedom starts,
I become a little stronger,
Learned ways to repair my heart,
There’s too much beauty not to be long.
Birds sing rejoice today,
Bringing me close to find my way,
The sun is warm on my back like a friend,
With me through till the end.
Darkness still comes around,
I won’t let it push me to the ground,
I sit healing slow,
It’s hard just to wait.
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Re: Process to Healing
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 08:31:06 AM AEST
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| This is a really nice poem. Great Job! |
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Re: Process to Healing
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by drhousexo3 on
Monday, 25th February 2008 @ 01:27:47 PM AEST
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| I really like the poem; and the message it sends!What just bothers me is the repetition of "be" in the first four verses but other than that; its good! :] Keep up the good work! |
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