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METH
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 10:56:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I slowly left the party
I knew it wasn't done
but my freind said we should try something
and that it would be fun
so I followed him under a bridge
and pulled out a tube of speed
he said he found it in his fridge
and was told it was better than weed
he said I should give it try
that nothing could go wrong
he said that it would make me high
and that it was really strong
so I reached out and took the emphetamine
and injected into a vein
I guess I have low self esteem
because I felt no shame
and as the drug started kicking in
the guy started walking away
he said that I was acting dim
and he couldn't understand a thing I'd say
but now my visions splitting
I know I'm not alright
I wonder who I was kidding
as things go out of sight
and now my heart stops pumping
I'm lying on the ground
that Meth was really something
and now I make no sound.
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Re: METH
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by Nothingness on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 08:45:38 AM AEST
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| Wow strong write good flow and lots of emotions you have a lot of talent and it really shows I just really hope things look up for you |
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Re: METH
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by axeman on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 07:42:25 PM AEST
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| Very good poem... I didn't noticed the Dont Try Meth until after i finished reading it... i wish someone told me that a long time ago.... All in all i loved it. it really made me think hard about what im doing cus at the moment that i read it and typing this comment i was getting spun.... well check out my poems and comment on them whenever u get time. |
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Re: METH
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by Lilbabe on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 05:18:44 PM AEST
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i only wish my friend had known this...she's addicted now and things arent too good for her. beautiful...i love it, i can relate. i know what meth does and this told it.
~lexy~ |
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Re: METH
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by TwistedCage on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 05:30:36 AM AEST
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I liked the flow, and the rhyming fit the piece well.
I think this is well written, and obviously warnes against possible outcomes of using this devastating drug!
Well done! |
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