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Contributed by Xnoybis on Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 04:08:36 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

And when I asked him
What of his meaning
He told me the sun
Was mad and steaming

Channeling and aiming
At its third axis
Though he couldn't illustrate
With any exactness

When pressed on the point
He told me it's like
The mechanical workings
Of your average bike

Geared planes of movement
Driven by chains
Made up of the energy
Of perpendicular planes

And as he fell silent
Or I thought he did
He broke the silence
And told me he'd hid

The key to the mess
So I had to ask
What he was on about
As he sipped the flask

He wiped his lips
And cocked me a grin
Waving his arm now
To gesture me in

He whispered the universe
Is nothing but perspective
That the current model
Is nothing but deffective

That all of these planes
Are pure hydrogen
With their own axis
And origins

That the count only mattered
From where you started
And the start only mattered
From where you departed

And then he fell silent
Again, only for good
And I scratched my chin
As he scratched and stood

As I pondered his words
And watched him leave
All I could think was
He almost had me.

Copyright © Xnoybis ... [ 2006-05-06 04:08:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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