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RESTLESSNESS....
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 10:26:17 PM in AEST
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Somberness.........How can one..."cope"
Still waters that take the mind
Making it pondering,...
Crossing to extemes beyond and more
Wondering heart
Is it not there, nor taken
Will it, or can it
Always taken to the non reality
BROKEN
Copyright ©
brew
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2006-05-05 22:26:17]
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Re: RESTLESSNESS....
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 12:02:00 AM AEST
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I feel something in this dayna-
something wonderful and tragic..
feelin' ya pain-
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Re: RESTLESSNESS....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 10:30:57 PM AEST
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Your one of the better writters on this site brew i like your style and presentation as always lovely work.
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Re: RESTLESSNESS....
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 07:21:26 PM AEST
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Your style is your own Dayna, and reading one of your writes is often a refreshing twist on the norm. Keep it up my dear : )
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Re: RESTLESSNESS....
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 09:19:19 PM AEST
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Really tight and well delivered journey...
The fog of somberness has lifted what is broken can be repaired...restless for action perhaps and life, for sure.
This deserves more kudos.
Well Done
Peace
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Re: RESTLESSNESS....
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:25:37 PM AEST
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You still have it. this is truly you and dinstinct and quite mysterious as ever. beautiful work you still pen. You know how to touch the realm that reaches one's heart.
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