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LOST TO ALL AND THY SELF
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 09:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sit and wonder....What is life
Is the forth effort put at strife
You give the inner, and heart
But...Does it give or take?
You pour out feelings
Is it given,....Back
You want to scream
You want to shout
"Why, I am I NOT heard"
Will it ever happen
Will they see...
I am but human
Seems I am not enough
Not to have the touch
Nor to have what is needed....
Life
Is the renduring soul lost...
GASP
Copyright ©
brew
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2006-05-05 21:32:44]
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Re: LOST TO ALL AND THY SELF
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by dalamar on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 09:43:42 PM AEST
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| very nice write i really like this one. thank you. |
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Re: LOST TO ALL AND THY SELF
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 09:58:50 PM AEST
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Extreme deep thoughts, Dayna.
This evokes a profound sadness. I hope everything
is okay with you. I feel ya -
Life is sometimes quite the burden.
~Breezy
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Re: LOST TO ALL AND THY SELF
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 09:21:29 PM AEST
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I read how your pen struggles to make sense more than just applying ink sometimes you have to carve the questions into the page so answers can be lifted.
Well Done
Keep the pen Flowing
Peace
Yangdantien |
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