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XXX Movies (in IV scenes)

Contributed by abnormalpunk on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 08:12:13 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

i closed my eyes
and heres what i saw:

a horse being burned
by other horses
they all had the same owner
they all lived in the same place
but the burning horse was different
or as the others called him:
odd and EVIL

i opened my eyes
as i sat in the pew next to you

i covered my ears
and heres what i heard:

seven voices singing in unison
six of them were VILE
they cursed
and swore their blasphemous lips til they bled
and the last one
was so beautiful
it killed me

i started to listen
and realized today was your weekly christian day

i closed my mouth
and heres what i tasted:

this sweet poison
entoxicating me
it seemed so perfect
(it wore a VEIL)
so i married it and consumed it
i felt fine at first
but the poison did me in
it burned and tore my flesh slowly
all because i chose the wrong goblet

i vomited
and never went to you again

i closed my heart to you
and this is how i died:

i emptied my soul
into your bloody rivers
i demolished myself
and made me you
i shredded my heart
so you could repair it
i died in their church
so you could show them
that you never told us to die
but:
''because of my son, you LIVE"

and there my story ends
and you have no part in it
evil, vile, veil, and live
are all spelled the same
(when coming from your pen)

but you are not the author
nor editor of my life
you are but a simple match
striking yourself upon me
with the hope to consume me in YOUR flame
just so you can feel better about yourself
feel better about you
feel better
please...

Copyright © abnormalpunk ... [ 2006-05-05 20:12:13]
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Re: XXX Movies (in IV scenes) (User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on Wednesday, 13th February 2008 @ 07:45:31 AM AEST
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wowww this is a brilliant story touched ma heart!

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