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FAKE FRIENDS
Contributed by
BEE
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Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 08:59:58 AM in AEST
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FAKE FRIENDS
what we need is truth
not backstabers
we want the ones that will know
know when were down
know when were happy
kno when were in need of someone
we dont need them jealus friends
the ones that leave you
the ones that tear you apart
make you mad
cheat
trade
and turn on you
with them the world is full
and it aint easy
to find people like that
that want to stay
who wont be dumb
who wont backstab you
who wont be a enemy
now if you are them
why be my friend
and ruin my life
dessert away far from this place
as fast as you can
becouse i really dont need you
and you dont need me
dont act fake
be real with me and tell me
becouse you aint goin anywere
FAKE FRIENDS
BY BRANDEN GOODRICH
Copyright ©
BEE
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Re: FAKE FRIENDS
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by kaitee on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 10:52:15 AM AEST
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if only everyone could read this......there would be less people in the world.---"dessert away far from this place..."
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Re: FAKE FRIENDS
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 10:00:51 AM AEST
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| Since you are asking for comments.....again, just wanted to say, if you use spellcheck, I think you would be taken more seriously. Take the time to look up the words. It teaches you more words. I'm 41 and never, ever hesitate to use the dictionary or the encyclopedia. I still learn from many great poets here at YPDC, as well, every single day. Peace, Laura |
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Re: FAKE FRIENDS
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by mindset on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:19:02 PM AEST
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oh my here we go again the corperate clones with their spell checks, this goes out to the author.
I felt ya inside spillin all over my screen stuff these tarts with their so so clean spellin and their so called we know what we on about, read their efforts lol....
leave them spellin alone shows the time the feel and leaves nothing to explain..
nice write....
And nice flow from inside on "truth"
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Re: FAKE FRIENDS
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by mindset on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:20:20 PM AEST
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deadheadknowit.
You think this comes from books :)
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Re: FAKE FRIENDS
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by SIMMI on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 03:40:28 PM AEST
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i love dis 1
dat ***** real n so true
i kno wat u sayin
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