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Moving To You
Contributed by
Sasha
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Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:58:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I spiral closer to your edge
I hear your thoughts
Your senses leading me to hidden places
I find you dancing in time’s vortex
And I cry at the distance between us
I follow your fire and dance with your destiny
I hear time wail and I walk into the smoke
To reach you and hold your hand..
To take you back to ride the winds
Where you and I are living thoughts
Where you and I were one,
One light, one life, one thought. . .
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Sasha
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2006-05-05 02:58:16]
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Re: Moving To You
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:22:02 AM AEST
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Simply beautifull romantic write,
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Moving To You
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:18:55 PM AEST
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Wow, I like this a lot. There are so many love poems on here, it's nice to find something a little different.
I just adore these lines:
I follow your fire and dance with your destiny
I hear time wail and I walk into the smoke
To reach you and hold your hand..
Really good write.
*hugs*
Phyllis xxx |
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