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Inspiration
Contributed by
xnoybis
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Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:54:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The pleasant experience
Of concentration
The passing on of
Inspiration
In this ever-moving
energy exchange
To both receive
And send out signals
evolving our collective
consciousness
To forget fear
And embrace change
I want to tell you something
I want to tell you everything
Tell me again
How it is you got here
I'll turn around
And tell you the same
Maybe we'll figure out
Why it is we met here
What it unlocks and
allows us to reclaim
Of what we've forgotten
Both here and beyond
Enhancing each other
As we absorb and respond
I want you to tell me something
I want you to tell me everything
The shedding of
All these restrictions
The forgetting of
All these afflictions
Setting aside all this
pomp and convention
The simple act of
Us breathing together
I want us to talk of something
I want us to talk of everything
Copyright ©
xnoybis
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2006-05-04 23:54:50]
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Re: Inspiration
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by rick317 on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 12:28:51 AM AEST
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| Well Said! |
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Re: Inspiration
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:11:43 AM AEST
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So heavenly beautifull!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Inspiration
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:12:16 AM AEST
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So heavenly beautifull!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Inspiration
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:14:39 AM AEST
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I like it. The theme of opening up and sharing hopes and sorrows, fire and water, is well conveyed. And just one of my favorite issues, anyway. Keep it up.
Andrew |
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Re: Inspiration
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by zelator on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:47:56 AM AEST
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| i really like this...it talks of something more meaningful than the obvious |
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Re: Inspiration
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 05:18:39 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write, well done |
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Re: Inspiration
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 01:54:41 PM AEST
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Great Write.!
Should be read by everyone.
So applicable to our day.!
Thanks for sharing
Elizabeth |
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Re: Inspiration
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:02:25 PM AEST
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This is nice.
I love the repetition. It's so simple, but says a lot. The last two lines of the stanza before the end are really good too. Also simply beautiful.
Great write,
*hugs*
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: Inspiration
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by mindset on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:22:31 PM AEST
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Only the start from this fellow being found whats inside and now can express the free......
well done |
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