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Forever to Be Desired
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:45:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel like I am dead
My eyes flash in and out of my body
I am raw, incomplete
Do you want to feel me?
Your hands like satin on my skin
This elusive touch that never holds
As my mind bends until it shatters
I like to breathe stale air
It's all I can feel
My mouth wide open
In search of a redemption that bleeds
Like my twisted salvation
And I need it
Whole and undone
Within me, cursing my veins with a seduction
buried deep and hollowed out
I clasp his hands
as if they were wounds
Bloody and torn
My pain, my sorrow
Exposed in a cut,
a slice divine
I live within my own angers
fighting a battle, a disease
My own enemies
I conquer the hunger
The craving of mercy
etched into my heart
Yet the presence of mercy
faded long ago.....forever to be desired
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Inevitable
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2006-05-04 23:45:05]
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Re: Forever to Be Desired
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 05:19:55 AM AEST
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| well done , well written |
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Re: Forever to Be Desired
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:06:33 PM AEST
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I like this a lot. It's different than the usual 'I hate myself, I feel dead' writes that I find on here.
This poem is actually very creative, and a lot of it stood out to me.
I love how the style changes so much in the middle.
Very well written.
Phyllis xxx |
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