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Last Moment in Time
Contributed by
keilantra
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Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 09:14:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Keep me your embrace just this once
Give me a chance to feel
Just a moment in time is all i need
An iota of time to be real.
Shine on me tonight (like a star)
You can be gone in the morning
Forget who i am or used to be
(Tomorrow we'll remember)
It's not a promise, just a warning.
Forgive the things i did before
For now, just breathe into me
Pretend that whisper of the past is just the ocean breeze;
Commit this crime beautifully.
Be tolerant of my imperfecctions
Just while I'm here
We can go back to our mutual disdain for each other later
But for now, treach me not to fear
The sound of another heartbeat next to mine
Or the gentleness in a touch
Be it a rock or a fist or a rose
The most complex thing is always love.
Make me feel like more than i am
During the last moment of my time
I'm willing if you're ready
I'm willing to live, love, and try.
Copyright ©
keilantra
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2006-05-04 21:14:26]
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Re: Last Moment in Time
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by rick317 on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 12:31:18 AM AEST
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| Nicely Done! |
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Re: Last Moment in Time
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by Sasha on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 05:58:07 AM AEST
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| I loved this poem, Keilantra, good work.. |
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Re: Last Moment in Time
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:17:10 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
I adore that second stanza. It's lovely. Also the third stanza. Those two stood out to me.
You need to spell check for the future, and add a few more capitals.
Great write,
Phyllis xxx |
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