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Untitled Poem #2
Contributed by
Drapes
on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 06:42:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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He is the sheep
With the
Pink wool.
His baa
Is musical.
He is the duck
With the
Blue feathers.
His quack
Hypnotizing.
He is the cow
With the
Purple spots.
He is the cow
That gives
Chocolate
Milk.
He is the king of the jungle,
He is the head of the flock,
He is the ruler of the forest.
I do not see him
As just a mouse.
Copyright ©
Drapes
... [
2006-05-04 18:42:00]
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Re: Untitled Poem #2
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 09:15:52 PM AEST
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This seems very... Modernist.
I like it a lot. I wish I knew of a cow that gave chocolate milk.. even if it didn't have purple spots.
Awesome write! |
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Re: Untitled Poem #2
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 10:13:23 PM AEST
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| nice original write. i could see a load of critics trying to find 100 hidden meanings in this, which makes it excellent in my book. i must say though, pink wool is just oh so ugly =] |
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Re: Untitled Poem #2
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:32:36 PM AEST
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*smiles* This is definitley unique.
I love the stanza about the cow. That made me laugh pretty well.
I'm not even gonna try and figure out what it's about :P
Good write,
Phyllis xx |
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