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Without You
Contributed by
BabiBoricua314
on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 05:32:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On A Sunlit Morning,
My eyes open like a book.
A book with pages
That had never been
Read by anyone.
I wake up happy as if I was
Happy as can be.
Happy to be with someone that
Truely cares for me.
Happy to be lucky with a perfect guy like you.
When you are without me,
I feel a half of me is missing.
Missinf like something that can
Be only complete when you
Are with me.
Without You, I am nothing.
Without You. I feel as if there is
A point where I should end
My Life.
This is how I truely feel when I
Am without you.
Copyright ©
BabiBoricua314
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2006-05-04 17:32:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 08:17:06 PM AEST (User
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You show your deep love for this person... nice to be able to see as clear as your poem states.. sense of loss of feeling is that lonely feeling... people do need people, even if we do have God in our lives.... He wants us to be so happy. thank you for your poem ... it is a deep write.... shows how much you love and care ....
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