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DEEP
Contributed by
BEE
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Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 12:03:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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DEEP
The path that i walk
Has a blind spot to it
A deep harsh blind spot
And as i try and look past it
I get blocked
Blocked by these dence minds
But im always trying to fight it
And get through
These deep forest along the path
Are like the phisical parts of my body
And i think to my self
How can i get around
How can i be the best
I wanna be able to finish this test he has given me
So i can be the one to fulfil my life
Its deep and hard
Can we all pass this test
BY BRANDEN GOODRICH
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BEE
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2006-05-04 12:03:58]
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Re: DEEP
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 09:08:10 PM AEST
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Very interesting write....
Makes one wonder as to what you are writing about.
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Re: DEEP
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by inoc on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:49:03 AM AEST
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an unusual write...
but a good one
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