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Together
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 01:23:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We are One,
Two Bodies,
One Love.
Time and again,
I've said those words,
And I swear on my life,
We will be together
Forever.
Come Hell,
I will Fight,
Come High Water,
The sea I will Part.
Nothing will stop me,
Im coming to you.
Nothing will prevent me,
I'll fight your battes.
Just keep your
Arms and Heart open.
For I'm coming Home.
I'm coming to You.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
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2006-05-04 01:23:16]
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Re: Together
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 05:07:07 AM AEST
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| well done, a beautiful write |
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Re: Together
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by JordonsBaby17 on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 10:20:26 AM AEST
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| a good write |
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Re: Together
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by ElliotRS on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 11:45:31 PM AEST
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| Brilliant. I can relate to that feeling of the one, and you said it just right. |
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Re: Together
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by candysears on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 04:58:37 PM AEST
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Such strong love..Very good..
Love your write...God Bless!
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Re: Together
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by PoeticHybrid on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 07:08:40 AM AEST
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| I have to say I am impressed, I didn't know you could produce these feelings. Good job man. |
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Re: Together
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:09:55 AM AEST
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Wwwwwoooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!
Very powerfull, encouraging write.
I could see u parting the sea like in the bible.
U r good!
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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