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These shadows grey
Contributed by
drako
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Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 11:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I walk amoung these shadows grey
with words to speak, but none to say
i push it down, it hurts to breathe
for all these thoughts i must concieve
Trapped inside my hatred dwells
a constant pain, a living hell
its burns inside with coals and flames
My blackened heart, the pain's to blame
Still i have some tears to shed
my empty heart, my soul is dead
for im the only one who knows
how much inside this hatred grows
these shadows grey, they covet me
from everything that sets me free
i wish not say what lives in me
It feeds on fear when darkness screams
Its unforgiving, what lives inside
When darkness leaves, i run to hide
but as i run, to my dismay
these shadows grey, in me they stay!
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drako
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2006-05-03 23:23:50]
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Re: These shadows grey
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by EddieDean on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 01:04:35 AM AEST
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| Nice work sir, but I've learned long ago that you should not keep your anger bottled up, find a relase. Very nice though, keep up the good work. |
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Re: These shadows grey
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by all_the_dead_roses on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:07:57 AM AEST
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| I really liked the words you used in it. I feel ya on this one. ~Sarah |
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