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I thought you'd be mine
Contributed by
whatsername
on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 09:43:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I thought you’d be mine
I dreamed you’d be there
I longed for your arms
I thought you did care
At night I would dream
I would see your sweet face
But nightmares unveiled
Over your charming grace
You stole my heart
And took it away
You kept it for yourself
And there it would stay
My tears were so cold
They would freeze my heart
But you did not care
If we were too part
My life is now gone
It’s shattered and torn
You gave me no love
Now my heart is all worn
Why did you break me?
Was I not good enough?
Did my heart love too much?
Or were my looks just too gruff
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2006-05-03 21:43:06]
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Re: I thought you'd be mine
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 10:02:22 PM AEST
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Well I know you ain't talkin to me 'cause I like gruff.............PPPUuuuurrrrrrrrrr.
Very romantic altho it 'caused u pain u turned it into this masterpeice.
Only a true poet can do this.
kudos, huggs, strength,
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Re: I thought you'd be mine
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by EddieDean on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 01:08:15 AM AEST
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I've been there too man, keep your head up and keep on truckin. I love how you turned your pain into poetry, I do what I can to do the same thing.
-Eddie Dean |
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