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I Went Back
Contributed by
shaydie_lady
on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 08:19:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I spoke to you today
I heard your bright strong laugh
I closed my eyes… and just for a moment,
For a moment I went back.
Back to a place where I spent
the best weekend ever
If I could… if I could
I would stay there forever
Back to the place
Where I felt safe
Where everyone acted
Like we all were the same
I opened my eyes as I realized
I was still in this hell of a place.
No matter how hard I try… how hard I imagine
My body cannot travel through time or through space.
I sit stuck here in the present
When my heart is in the past.
I should have known… I should have realized
That the weekend wasn’t going to last.
I spoke to you today
I heart your bright strong laugh
I closed my eyes… and just for a moment
For one precious moment
I went back.
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Re: I Went Back
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 11:05:22 PM AEST
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I loved this poem so much...It took me back a bit also..... not to a weekend but a night..one very special night. Thank you for sharing this..
Jenni |
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Re: I Went Back
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by Lo2681 on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 02:39:17 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem:) It reminded me of a person that made me feel the same. It's meaningful but simple in a sense and i like that. |
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