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I Think You Broke My Heart
Contributed by
Bamber
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Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:12:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I think you did it
You may have
I'm not sure
But I think you broke my heart
It was there one day
Whole and together
Mended from before
No shattered pieces to be found
When you left me here
In this cold place
I felt something break
Something that had once been whole
The world feels cold
And my heart feels numb
Why did you do it?
Why did you break it?
I never knew when you said, "Good-bye"
That it would do this
Leave me here
With a broken heart
Copyright ©
Bamber
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2006-05-03 19:12:06]
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Re: I Think You Broke My Heart
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 08:17:31 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I can feel the confusion and pain in this..
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Re: I Think You Broke My Heart
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 08:36:43 AM AEST
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I can relate. It's a good thing that even a broken heart will mend and grow from these experiences. Nice write.
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Re: I Think You Broke My Heart
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 08:53:59 AM AEST
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such a pained write, one of which many will be able to understand, I know that I can. well written and expressed, you made it easy for the reader to feel your emotions,
take care
Pix xx |
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