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Pseudo-affection
Contributed by
keilantra
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Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 03:56:30 PM in AEST
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Binded, but now subtley broken
A sad thing, but this is the love i have chosen...
I breath in the nicotine in your skin
I brought you the iodine and blood to fertilize your sin.
Such pretty lies we tell, like our pretty smiles
People like you come a dozen for a dime.
Programmed and ready and expertly written
Scripted to be perfectly smitten.
I abhor your taste (like summer gone bad)
Your going out of style, like a fading fad.
But I'm keeping you here, you'll be nifty to use
I'll do what you did, profusely abuse.
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keilantra
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2006-05-03 15:56:30]
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Re: Pseudo-affection
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 12:14:16 AM AEST
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Wow! Great write. The opening line of your two line stanzas in each were potent and artfully striking! I have come to be a true fan of your work. Keep writing!
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Re: Pseudo-affection
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by rapnificent on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 03:54:10 PM AEST
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Excellant poem.
It captures some of the perplexity that a relationship can definitely hold.
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