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Tears
Contributed by
lonely_boy
on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 02:54:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The tears they won’t fall
Though I'm trying so hard
The pain never leaves
My heart gets scarred
The distance grows
And the silence kills
Just to hear your voice
The world’s blood I’d spill
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lonely_boy
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2006-05-03 14:54:04]
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 06:18:23 PM AEST
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I liked this poem. Short and sweet...well, not so much sweet but you know what i mean.
Listen bud, i've been there, i don't know exactly what you're going thru, but from you're user name and the poem, i could take a pretty good guess. Just hang in there, things get better, but only if you let them get better. If you keep pushing away all good things in life, you really have no reason to live. There's so much to live for, sometimes you're just a little blinded but what you don't have. It happens, nothin to be ashamed of, i'm sure most would agree they've been there at some point. Don't let it get to you, embrace life and all it's blessings and before you know it, a genuine smile will appear on your face.
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Re: Tears
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 06:56:44 PM AEST
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I really like the poem. Short and simple but definitley to the point.
And I know exactly what you're talking about. I'm going through the same thing. Message me if you ever want/need to talk. I'll understand.
Anyway, nice write!
-Drapes |
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