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Sky's the Limit
Contributed by
socks
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Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 02:12:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Bound by nature’s embrace
her limits imposed, lovingly, to protect
the sky painted in a Multicoloured
movement, turmoil of her emotion,
dancing in a graceful flight up
up and then, instinctively,
the clouds Suffocate, their feathers – like an old war
Wound warning the impending storm - quiver
Beating in Rhythm, wings slide over air
tumbling, banking
wary of the clouds and Unconscious intuition
Balancing dangerously on the soaring stage
last rights, last bows,
Encore.
Copyright ©
socks
... [
2006-05-03 14:12:05]
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Re: Sky's the Limit
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 07:10:59 AM AEST
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| This is a lovely poem, just loved the imagery used in this. good job! |
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Re: Sky's the Limit
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by Polka on
Tuesday, 5th February 2008 @ 08:56:23 PM AEST
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| The imagery was nice; unusual capitalisation of some words, like Emily Dickinson, |
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Re: Sky's the Limit
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 25th February 2008 @ 10:45:50 PM AEST
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i was very impresseed with this also, clear were the images that passed through my mind, i could almost feel movement as i read, tossed from top to bottom, fabulous work here, loved the last 2 lines,
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