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Thoughts
Contributed by
nothingness
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Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 01:38:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The thoughts are there they will not leave
All I knew was a lie nothing for me to believe
You ask me why you act like you care
I know better I’ve learned life isn’t fair
I can’t think clear, only one thought is strong
When will I die I hope it isn’t long
I didn’t choose to think in this way
Its just there every night and every day
It takes over my thoughts and my dreams
Nothing drowns it not even the loudest screams
I tried every thing to try and fix me
But it’s just the way I am, its who I will always be
I know you tried and I love you for all you done
But I hate living each day missing out on all the fun
I can’t control who I am or what goes through me head
All I know is I want so much to be dead
Not to have pain or any thoughts at all
Not having to wonder why I’m always the one to fall
I am so sorry I wish you wouldn’t cry
I love so much but still I really just want to die
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nothingness
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2006-05-03 13:38:42]
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Re: Thoughts
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 02:36:23 PM AEST
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Very emotional write...well done!
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Re: Thoughts
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by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 03:29:47 PM AEST
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I've been there. Read "Willing Hostage" and you can see what I mean. Hang in there!
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Re: Thoughts
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by Lilbabe on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 04:23:19 PM AEST
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great write...i wish i could tell you how to make those thoughts go away but i'm still trying to figure that out. i hope you make through alright. i liked your poem.
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Re: Thoughts
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by stefi on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 05:18:25 PM AEST
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hey you sound so sad don't be sad be glad!
I hope you feel better (heart wise/ soul)
i really likede the poem but like i said you sound like your really down
i guess i could say get well!!! :)
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