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RUN AWAY
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:19:22 AM in AEST
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hbadday
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Somedays I want to run away
and leave this entire life behind
somehow I want to find a way
to live a life thats undiffined
I'll abandon my entire life past
just to get rid of all this pain
I'll kill memories that last
their making me insane
I'll leave a note thats says I'm dead
and I'll start life over again
I'll ignore every tear they shed
and this time
I won't pretend.
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Forgotten_soul
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2006-05-03 07:19:22]
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Re: RUN AWAY
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by Nothingness on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 08:27:19 AM AEST
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A very good and powerful write but if you don’t mind some wisdom from a lost teen I can tell you the thought may seem oh so perfect like that’s the only way to go and every thing will get better…well in my experience of taking off they don’t rest till they find you because apparently some people really do care I use to feel like I was so alone and completely hopeless I was a suicidal cutter the bottom of the barrel heck I still cut but im working on it the point is things will get better you just gotta keep going no matter how impossible it seems the run would be to give in and I don’t know you personally but I know you can make it through this tough time things will get better im sure of it so my opinion is that you should try to hang in there.
~ always there if ya wanna chat~
~nothingness~
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Re: RUN AWAY
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by Aeris030388 on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 09:07:47 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. I've often felt this way.
A nice write.
-Roxanne. |
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Re: RUN AWAY
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by Drapes on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 10:11:00 AM AEST
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Oh wow, I really liked that!! Its got a great beat and a lot of meaning. Really great write!
-Drapes |
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Re: RUN AWAY
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by midnight_writer on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 08:13:25 PM AEST
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i LOVE runaway poems...dunno why...but i especially like this one...because i also like poems that rhyme (seeing as that i can't rhyme myself)
but anyway...i love it...especially the last line! it's amazing...
x-Midnight~Amaya-x |
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