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Out Of The Blue
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:18:25 AM in AEST
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Out of the blue,
you came.
Beyond the picture,
beyond the frame.
Destiny's angel,
who lit a flame.
Telling my heart,
to live again.
Your face, your touch
your gentle smile.
Such heavenly looks,
within your eyes.
I wish, I wonder
if you and I.
I dream, I ponder
with hopeful sighs.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2006-05-03 07:18:25]
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Re: Out Of The Blue
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:54:14 PM AEST
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| The first words that came into my mind were: gentle, sad, dreamy. This poem is so understated, yet it speaks for miles and miles about loss and what could have been. I will not pretend to know anything about you, but you will find your jodoh one day... |
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Re: Out Of The Blue
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 08:18:01 AM AEST
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This has such a melodic flow. So pleasant to read almost sad and yet hopeful.
and yeah, the waiting is the hardest part... |
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Re: Out Of The Blue
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 08:31:10 AM AEST
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"Out of the blue".... I have to wonder if there is not a dual meaning there, my friend... intending to convey something unexpected and serving as an indication that one is moving passed (or 'out of') a state of melancholy (feeling 'blue')?
I pondered, too, your remark about life and love being "so complicated". I'm inclined to think complicated isn't always a "bad" thing. Many, I think, believe it is easy to find, to fall and/or to be in love... and maybe... just maybe... it really shouldn't be. And frankly, if you asked me, it just... isn't. (That is not necessarily bad... honestly, I think it is part of what makes it so wonderful really.)
This is gentle and lovely. I don't find it sad at all really. Hopeful, tender, dreamy - yes... but not sad.
Rambling as ever (and begging your forgiveness for having done so),
~Snemmy
Oh and... Hazlan? We do miss you around here still, you know. *wink* |
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Re: Out Of The Blue
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 08:57:29 AM AEST
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This so soft, tender and simple.... Love poetry is best when its written with lots of heart and little complication, like this one is.
Very well done sir
Larry |
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Re: Out Of The Blue
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 01:25:55 PM AEST
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AwwwwwwwwwBaronhawk 'tis true, for me and for you............there is always an angel just waiting to help you when you are down. It's happened in my life and now yours also!
Someone to pick you up when you are down, and someone to wipe away the tears before you drown.
This is a very gentle, lovely write, my favorite kind. Enjoyed reading it immensely
So good you're back .........we all missed you dear Baronhawk, next time you take to flight please stay closer to the earth so we can all watch you soar!
Warm love
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