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Destiny
Contributed by
gdo
on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 06:42:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Destiny
T'was our destiny you might say.
You could look at it in any way.
Some say we were just stupid kids.
Whatever we were,
Our love was so pure.
I remember,
Upon our fourth meeting,
You gave me a gift worth keeping.
It was your heart,
So, I gave you mine.
Now we are eternally intertwined.
In our graves we remain.
In separate coffins, what a shame.
"Are you ready?" you said,
Each of us holding guns to our hearts.
Forever we are now,
We won't ever part.
"I guess." I replied.
With one last kiss,
Thank God, the bullets did not miss.
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gdo
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2006-05-03 06:42:53]
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Re: Destiny
(User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 09:39:46 AM AEST
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| not bad..but cud have been more powerful |
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Re: Destiny
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by GemmaLouiseRose on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 06:50:25 AM AEST
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| i disagree with the ... whoever that is, below me, i thought this was nicely dark, gave me a twinge xx |
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