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Through the Window
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 05:20:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I can see your face,
Smell your hair,
Almost feel your warmth,
And yet,
I cannot touch you.
Through the Window.
I can see you cry,
But I can't wipe
Your tears away.
Please don't cry
For me,
I am doing okay.
Through the Window.
You are beautiful,
But its getting dark,
You are going further
Away from me.
Through the Window.
It's so warm and calm,
I can't see you anymore.
Please don't cry for me.
Now I go to a better place.
Don't cry for me.
For I love you,
Now I'm gone,
Away from you.
Through the Window.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
... [
2006-05-03 05:20:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Through the Window
(User Rating: 1 ) by Forgotten_soul on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:21:10 AM AEST (User
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thats so deep, it confuzes me, so it must be good! ( kinda dim here ) |
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Re: Through the Window
(User Rating: 1 ) by spider on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 03:13:42 PM AEST (User
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perhaps its just becuase i am sad atm but that made me cry :P
it's really good.
people like you set the standards very high for the rest of us |
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Re: Through the Window
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 04:50:52 PM AEST (User
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Very sad,but a very beautiful write..
Will read all your work..
God Bless!
candysears |
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Re: Through the Window
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoeticHybrid on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 07:10:25 AM AEST (User
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Very deep. I like it a lot. I will have to try to set my standards this high. |
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Re: Through the Window
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:05:31 AM AEST (User
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A magical write even tho it's sad.
Awesome work!
huggs, smiles, windows,
emy |
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