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Homicide Makes A Meal For The Birds
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 10:15:43 PM in AEST
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You disgust me so
Hidden behind your insincere words
Wanted to do this for such a long time
Homicide makes a meal for the birds
The bullet, the daggar
I don't care which
Die and burn in hell
You heart.ess, eyeless *****
You close-minded waste of breath
I know one cure for that: Death
This strong emotion
Needs to be expressed
Up to this moment
It has been supressed
I've had my eyes open
They burn ar the sight ou you
I only wish I could show them
Then they would hate you too
All of your personalities
Everything that comes out
The worse weigh out the better
For you, there is no excuse
You refuse
To listen
My cryptic words
Are simply of no use
You were a lost cause
From the very start
I know the cure for you
I will tear you apart
You dusgust me so
Hidden behind your insincere words
I'm done with you
Homicide makes a meal for the birds
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SmileSkinDeep
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Re: Homicide Makes A Meal For The Birds
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by Lady_Daisy on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 11:28:30 PM AEST
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| This reminds me of my early works, full of hate and angst. You have natural talent for it, as I don't and didn't. I enjoyed the read, keep it up! |
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Re: Homicide Makes A Meal For The Birds
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by DamentedSuicide on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 10:29:07 AM AEST
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| I really liked this poem in a morbid since. |
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Re: Homicide Makes A Meal For The Birds
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by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 12:52:45 PM AEST
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omg, strong hate there. fantastically written. morbid, yes, and dark. absolutely loved it. serious talent you've got there april.
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Re: Homicide Makes A Meal For The Birds
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by Keilantra on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 07:13:34 PM AEST
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wow. very deep. i can almost feel the disgust seeping fromt the very words. nice write. keep it up,,,
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-K |
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