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Young and Blind
Contributed by
Shyne
on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 12:38:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Though I'm young
I'm still blind
I look around to see what I can't find
My mind wonders
What the future may hold
But the world's dark ways are wicked and cold
Though I'm young
I have a long way to go
My blindness makes me young
As my experiences makes me old
I get lost when I'm blind
With these words I can find
My poetry helps me
Realize
Why I'm blind
One day I'll see
That my blindness has strengthened me
Copyright ©
Shyne
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2006-05-02 12:38:11]
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Re: Young and Blind
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by J-E-C on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 06:38:28 PM AEST
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| Yes, poetry will help with almost everything. Poetry has helped me alot in my life, and I'm glad that I still write. It makes things more clear as you write them down, then once you see what you have come up with, you realize whats going on with current situations. |
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Re: Young and Blind
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by Spike on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 06:24:29 AM AEST
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Very promising first post. A good strong metaphor, describing (I think) optimistic naivety as a gift, not a curse. And poetry and the breadcrumbs back to the light - superb. A real talent here, alright.
Spike |
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Re: Young and Blind
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by Polka on
Tuesday, 5th February 2008 @ 08:58:58 PM AEST
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| The short lines cleverly replicated the speech patterns of childhood. The rhyming too. |
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