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Contributed by nothingness on Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 10:01:38 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I can’t believe it, how could you have done this to me?
I though you were special, I thought maybe you could see,
I thought you were different so I confided all I had in you
But no, you are just like everyone else, you could never be true
I fell again after I promised never to trust another soul
I feel so broken and betrayed, give it up; it’s out of your control
You had your chance; you lied and played me like a fool
It’s my fault for even thinking you could break the worlds rule
I am still broken trying to put myself together all over again
Still choking on the thoughts of all we could have been
You chose your path and now I have to figure out my own
It’s so hard with out you helping me; I can’t believe you left me alone
Still though it was me that can never again give you my trust
My thoughts are clouded who really was the one that was so unjust
Is it me for giving you so many of my problems I couldn’t handle
Or is it you for giving me false hope proving it just to be another scandal
All of this is just too much my mind is drifting clouded by sorrow
Nothing seems like it will ever be the same, like there will be no tomorrow
I wonder if you ever think about me, or if you wonder if I am thinking of you
Your not here to tell me not to give up or what will happen if I do…
So I am left here asking the darkness and lifeless walls
What do I do when your not here to listen to my calls

Copyright © nothingness ... [ 2006-05-02 10:01:38]
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Re: What now? (User Rating: 1 )
by Shyne on Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 12:44:57 PM AEST
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I can understand what you are going through at the beginning of this poem. I really liked it.

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