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JOY OF TOGETHERNESS.
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Magic of love; joy of togetherness,
those precious movement of glee that
cherished and flourished - radiating cheerful
fragrance of trust - past a decade and a half.
Buff broke the empty bobble; gone were
those fragile illusion of togetherness
stood alone drowned beneath those fond haunting
memories, piercing my heart like thorny spikes.
My longing spirit awaits, for that moment in time
when my soul unchains from the mortal cage to
reunite thee my love in our divine abode, where there
be no severance form perpetuity and beyond.
My heart throbs to be drunk in love until an angel of death
knock at my door steps to escort me to thee my love.
(FRANCO)
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2006-05-01 21:18:00]
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Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS.
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:58:48 PM AEST
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An awesome, incredible Write that shows the reader that true lyv never dies.
huggs,
emystar |
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Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS.
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 10:39:16 PM AEST
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Awww Franco, I feel your pain and loss through this write. Don't be too hurry to go, though. Remember, you are needed here.
Hugs,
A. Jenni |
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Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS.
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by JGB on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 12:26:17 AM AEST
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Lost love. I can feel it. It sounds like what my sister-in-law was saying to me this weekend about my brother. He was her first real love.
I just don't know what to say!
Joanna |
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Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS.
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 07:31:34 AM AEST
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Oh Franco! - there is hardly anybody who can more emphasize with your splendid words of love for your departed wife than I can.
But she hears you, she knows all about it. feels your poem,. every line of it. Exactly as my Stephen does.
It feels as if he looked over my shoulders.
Wonderful tribute! - only a great and deep love as yours can as yours can give it.
And your beloved wife is aware of it by the grace of God, the source of all love.
Blessings
Elizabeth
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Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 06:24:44 PM AEST
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Masterful (as usual) movement from rememberance to reunion of forever. I agree, although fearless of unchaining the soul, we'd like to have ya 'round. I wanna turn ya into cowboy!
A gripper of the heart, this piece of yours. And a wonderful and I'll bet ya, heard by someone special waitin' fer you. Kinda like words waiting on a wall, she'll show ya that it's hanging on her wall in eternity. Flawless work, well, 'cept that a between like and thorny in the second verse. Don't worry, we fergive genius.
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Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 04:40:04 PM AEST
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I never have left the love of my first husband who is in heaven.. I know one day we will all be together.. all of us.. even my husband michael awaits for this happiness.. God allowed my first husbands wishes and prayers to be alive in Him with my second husband.. so.. your poem really is deep and says something to me.. I pray you are well.. and one day.. a most beautiful angel will help you get to her... and the same goes for me and all others.. praise God..
A masterpiece poem.. love and hugs, your spiritual sister.. raquelleah who does love and care.. |
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