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Burnt out too
Contributed by
packatack
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Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:15:02 PM in AEST
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Burnt out from life
Burnt out from love
Wondering if God really hears His son below
I know he's there and really does care
Hoping and praying that all goes well today
Burnt out from being burnt out
Some how I know that its all my fault
Keep it strong keep it together
Then One day it will all come together
Burnt out from life
Burnt out from love
But now I know that God really do loves
Thank God for all ppl who really do love
A being so vast and powerful above all
Peace in mind no worries to have
Like a baby boy who just loves to play along
Never burnt out but I know whos there
Such loving wonderful person
Straight from above......
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Re: Burnt out too
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:30:07 PM AEST
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Well focused poem with clear intention and precedence, my poet friend, keep the good work going.
FRANCO
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Re: Burnt out too
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by redtears on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:40:51 PM AEST
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| hi! aww! i just want to say that this is a very lovely poem and i'm very happy that you read mine and i actually inspired you! lol, thanks! |
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Re: Burnt out too
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 10:15:43 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful and positive write, and I dearly love it.. I do believe the flame is still lit... in your heavenly heart.
RL |
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Re: Burnt out too
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by desireemiote on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:24:01 AM AEST
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That is so sweet tat one poet could inspire another.. truly the reason I love this site.
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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