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Burnt
Contributed by
redtears
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Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 08:47:07 PM in AEST
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Burnt
I try to hide it,
Face the enemy.
Pain over pain,
Inside and out.
Will the Lord forgive me?
I cannot stop.
The pain thickens,
Red is seen everywhere.
The pain inside,
Is burning my soul.
The pain out,
I can direct.
Ask the Lord for forgiveness.
Would He take pity?
Open the heavens,
For a broken soul?
I shall think not.
Down to the darkness,
The flames down below.
To burn my already burnt soul.
Wake up from nightmares.
Realize and change,
But it is too late.
Leftover soul be gone.
redtears
May 2006
Copyright ©
redtears
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2006-05-01 20:47:07]
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Re: Burnt
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by wizard on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 08:51:23 PM AEST
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nicely done...i think this is great!
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Re: Burnt
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by Packatack on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:04:16 PM AEST
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VEry well written and simple!
Dried up soul and i feel like that sometimes
Keep it up!
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Re: Burnt
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by Marly on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:27:07 PM AEST
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not confusing at all
well said
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Re: Burnt
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by chaos78 on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 11:25:20 PM AEST
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| a very good write i enjoyed the read |
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